debate(modifying)

debate

The new factory has had several important effects on the town. First of all, there are many positive effects to open a large factory in town. For one thing, a number of new people are increased and getting a job is easier. Other thing is that the town will be rich and energetic. In addition, according to young people’s demand, many cultural facilities will be built and peoples can enjoy a cultural life.
On the other hand, we will predict many negative effects. The town will be crowded and dirty. Therefore, people will be stressed out.
Also, the increase of cars will bring about a traffic jam and traffic accident. In addition, the waste water and exhaust gas from the new factory will incur various environmental pollutions. Finally, the town has lots of bars and many crimes because of income’s increase. Therefore, the town will become worse in the educational environment side.
Overall, these negative effects of the new factory should be gone over enough. First, as people increase continually, we should make a rule and regulation that can keep the town in order. Second, we should widen the road to keep cars moving. As a result, the traffic accident will reduce of itself.
Third, environment pollution is very harmful for people’s health, so we absolutely should build eco- friendly factory. Most importantly, the town has a harmful factor in the educational environment side, so we should keep a safe of school area. If we solve these problems, the new factory will bring about many effects on the town.