2008년 6월 26일 목요일

debate(modifying)

debate

The new factory has had several important effects on the town. First of all, there are many positive effects to open a large factory in town. For one thing, a number of new people are increased and getting a job is easier. Other thing is that the town will be rich and energetic. In addition, according to young people’s demand, many cultural facilities will be built and peoples can enjoy a cultural life.
On the other hand, we will predict many negative effects. The town will be crowded and dirty. Therefore, people will be stressed out.
Also, the increase of cars will bring about a traffic jam and traffic accident. In addition, the waste water and exhaust gas from the new factory will incur various environmental pollutions. Finally, the town has lots of bars and many crimes because of income’s increase. Therefore, the town will become worse in the educational environment side.
Overall, these negative effects of the new factory should be gone over enough. First, as people increase continually, we should make a rule and regulation that can keep the town in order. Second, we should widen the road to keep cars moving. As a result, the traffic accident will reduce of itself.
Third, environment pollution is very harmful for people’s health, so we absolutely should build eco- friendly factory. Most importantly, the town has a harmful factor in the educational environment side, so we should keep a safe of school area. If we solve these problems, the new factory will bring about many effects on the town.

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2008년 6월 24일 화요일

Type your summary here

Good appearance

Our society is required good appearance.
- As some record, the people having a good appearance can do his work well.
- In some way, it sometimes help them their work deal with easy.

From someday, plastic surgery became social trend.
- Eyelid reshaping is not surgery any more.
- Many other cosmetic surgerys
- Gangnam, the street is lined with plastic surgery.
- Many demand
- plastic surgeon
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this trend for a good appearance is not bad
- diet : to make a good shape
- plastic surgery : skin cleaning, remove the scar or mole or freckles, etc
- have a confidence, can do well,
- many opportunities that meet to good guy

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2008년 6월 19일 목요일

minimize


The small trouble with business today is just that people don’t have enough time.
Perhaps, companies have reduced their workforces so that fewer people can do the same amount of work.
I think that managers don’t see what is happening around them. They may be need their time to work through their regular tasks and have no time to take on new initiatives.
Time for reflection is partly important. Decisions taken now could be affect today’s business, they can maybe have an influence on business in the long term. Strategy is a little concern of senior management when it needs to be the concern of everybody in the company.

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2008년 6월 18일 수요일

my family(not yet)


My family
I’m glad for introducing my family. There are four peoples in my family: husband, daughter, son, and me.
My husband is very tall. Before the marriage, he said his tall was 180. but his height was increased day by day. At last, he said his reality, his height is 184. as you can see that, he is very passive. Also, he is too much lazy. His hobby is only watching TV as he lies down on a sofa.

My daughter is 11 years old. She has a outstanding sense of fashion. Every morning, she is very busy to choose clothes. Her dream is continually changing . I desire that she would be a fashion designer.
Now, she is a girl at puberty. So, she is often angry without a reason.
I’d like to talk about her school life and friends with her. It is not easy to do that.
I have to try it far more than now.

My son is 4 years old. I bare my son in 2005. he was born as a result of modern medicine. so to speak, he was a tube baby. I had many problems to get a baby.
Now, I’m happy due to my cute son.

Finally, I’ll talk about me. I work for Seoul metropolitan government. I have served during about 20 years. Most of people thinks that public officer is very comfortable and easy job. However, we are very busy and we suffer from lots of work. So, as I need to some leisure, I apply for training of English. Now, I am studying English at the University of Seoul. This studying will be continued until January in 2008.
This is my family story. Thank for hear that.


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2008년 6월 10일 화요일

in my opinion



In my opinion, it is harmful for mothers with small children to work outside of the house. For one thing, it’s difficult to find a reliable babysitter if she don’t have any relative to look after her children. Moreover, children of a working mother will have a bad habit or friends because they are apart from their mother during the daytime. Finally, children of a working mother may grow up with a feeling of uneasiness.

In my opinion, smoking shouldn’t be banned in restaurants. First, smoking in restaurant will give your parter an unpleasant feeling if your partner don’t smoke. Second, peoples who seat next to the table will have a bad time due to the smell. Third, the restaurant will become disrepute.

I think that nuclear energy isn’t the best way to meet our energy needs.
First of all, it’s very difficult to manage it.
Next, the nuclear energy will bring about a fatal result if the nuclear energy fall out.
Finally, we should have start-up a higher cost.

I think that the drinking age shouldn’t be lowered to age 18.
For one thing, youngsters under age 18 have no power of judgement. Second, they don’t have enough an ability about ethical decision or moral judgement. Third, the period under age 18 is the time to study for their future. It’s not help to drink at an early age.

In my opinion, it is good for children to watch TV. First reason, Educational programs teach children basic skills such as reading and writing. Second reason, children can learn about science, history, and the arts. Third, TV exposes children to different countries, cultures, and ideas. Fourth, News programs inform children about what is going on in their community. Fifth, TV gives children free and interesting entertainment. With these reasons, Watching TV is useful for children.

When children see something on TV, they become interested and want to learn more about it. Children learn to recognize famous people. News programs teach children about important things that are going on in the

In my opinion, TV can be harmful to children
The first reason is that there is too much violence on TV. For example, There are over seven acts of violence per hour on prime-time TV. Especially, The most violent TV shows are on Saturday morning, when many children are watching.

The second reason is that Children see a false picture of human relationships. In addition, watching TV is too passive. Children should be doing more creative and active things. Moreover, Children want to buy everything they see on commercials.

in my opinion, women shouldn't be requried to serve in the army.
first, gerneally speaking, women have a weaker physical strenth. second, women don't proper for combat beacuse most of women have a longer response time. third, the army can maintain enough with sufficient manpower. if the army don't have only man, there are some women to apply for the army.

in my opinion, drinking and driving is a serious crime. first, he will hurt too much or kill somebody. second,




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2008년 6월 8일 일요일

Description of the hometown


My hometown is Seoul. It is located in South Korea. The size of Seoul is 605.52 square kilometers. About ten million peoples live there.
There are four distinctive seasons : spring, summer, fall and winter. Summer is a little hot and humid. Winter is a little cold and snowy. And spring and fall are very good seasons for outdoor activities: go hiking, hang out with family, go to the picnic. All seasons are very beautiful.
One of Seoul’s features is a long river, Hangang, which runs through out the city. The city is divided into two parts by the river with Gangbuk and Gangnam. There are many bridges above the river. The night view of these bridges is very beautiful.
Seoul is very pleasant and active. Most of people work during the day and enjoy the nightlife, as like most of large town. There are many things to see and do in Seoul. The city has many interesting tourist attractions: museums, gallerys, royal palaces, amusement parks, etc.
Best of all, as Seoul has lots of mountains, peoples always live with nature. Though Seoul is a large city and crowded, it’s a good place for peoples to feel happy.

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2008년 6월 4일 수요일

My vacation at Elephant Rock Beach

Hi,
Hi,
I take a vacation with my family at the Elephant Rock Beach, in Irvine, CA. As I did lots of work last month, I need to relax in the countryside, like this beach. This beach is usually sunny and clean, but sometimes cloudy. Also for it's rarely crowded and quiet, it's nice place for relaxing.
The view of the beach is more spectacular than that of any other places I have seen until now. The seashore is sandy, and a rainbow of shells is glistening. I walk barefoot on the sand, feeling cool. The waves are strong and high.
This visiting is my first time, but I really like it. The sea seems to give me an answer about whole troubles. so I intend to make this beach into my favorite vacation place. I’ll let you feel my place next vacation. You may expect it.
Your best friend

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2008년 6월 3일 화요일

Graph discribe


1) The euro-dollar rate for three months
The euro-dollar rate dropped slowly in the first quarter. But then there was a large fluctuation at about 0.68. Since then it went down sharply in the third quarter.
(2) The yen-dollar rate for three months
The yen-dollar rate decreased rapidly in the first two quarters. But then, it remained constant at about 108. Since then, it dropped suddenly in the fourth quarter.
(3) The yuan-dollar rate for three months
The yuan-dollar rate dropped steadily and there was a small fluctuation
over the whole months.
(4) The won-dollar rate for three months
The won-dollar rate bottomed out at 940 in the first four quarters and during this period, there was a small fluctuation. But then, it skyrocketed in the last quarter.
5) The growth of Argentine income for one century
The GDP of Argentina(solid line) bottomed out at about 3000 in fifty years, but then increased rapidly to about 11,000.

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writing practice


P75 b. 2.
It’s shape is rectangular. It is dark brown.
The front of the radio has digital watch and small speaker. Frequency indicator under the watch. Four push buttons are under the speaker.
20 inches electronic wire and plug are from the back.
It is 10 inches wide, 18 inches long and 10 inches deep.
It has a surround system. 100,000won.
3.
It is made of leather, a crocodile skin. it is hand-made in korea.
It has a simple design, It has long belt, the front of the bag has a large pocket. It’s shape is square. It is 20 inches wide, 30 inches high, and 10inches deep.
It comes in two colors : light brown, dark brown.
P77
it

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